Assignment #1: Instructor Feedback.


 In these photos here, you see where my teacher went in after my final submission and left me some feedback. I was able to go back after this and she let me do a revised final rough draft. This was a great way for me to be mindful of what seemed like minor details. There was another area not pictured above where I was writing "70's" as a descriptive time frame and learned through her guidance that the correct way to write that is with the apostrophe in the front. An example would look like this....'70s. 

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